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Reviewer: bg4200 Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 11, 2019 08:07 pm Title: Chapter 45

such a good story, wish it would've been finished

Reviewer: skylord Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 26, 2016 07:50 pm Title: Chapter 10

She and Michael are so sexy T_T

I ship it!

Reviewer: skylord Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 26, 2016 06:45 pm Title: Chapter 3

Loved the dance scene! And also really enjoying the story ((:

Reviewer: mjfan1978 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 19, 2013 02:43 pm Title: Chapter 45

!!!!!!!NEW READER ALERT!!!!!!!

OMG!! What an awesome story. I absolutely L.O.V.E. this story so much. I love every thing about it from the plot to the relationship between Michael to Diana to Tinsley. Keep it coming,  please don't stop :). 

Please update soon 

Reviewer: martovska Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 05, 2011 12:51 am Title: Chapter 45

Hey girl,


First of all, thank you for replying back to me, and answering my questions.


And truth to tell, the moment I have read that review, I knew it could kill the mood, and motivation to write. But look, that reader just came only once, totally disapproved the main characters, told you how the story has to be written, and left. No reviews from that person ever again!!! And I hardly believe, whoever that reader was, came back to read the chapters that you wrote afterwards! …..But look at the rest of your readers! This story has almost 21 thousand read count, high ratings, and excitement from the readers who are loyal to you!!! They actually scream with excitement “YAY! FINALLY an update to this story! I missed it SO Much!”, or here is another one “ I am in love with this story : D Can’t wait for the next chapter xox”.  And if you quit, you easily let that reader to win…… I know that in order to write something, you have to feel motivated to do so. But if you don’t feel like it, I totally understand, and respect it.


Just to let you know. I’m not going to give up my hopes for another chapter just yet LOL. This romantic story IS TOO GOOD TO BE OVER!!! And if you ever get motivated to write it again, I will be very happy!!! …. I might go back and leave a review for each and single chapter LOL  Just kidding, but I must say that many of those were very romantic, some were hilarious (the girl’s talk), and some  of those just made my heart beat faster! You are really AMAZING writer!! I will be glad to read your other stories, since all of them seem unique and never repeating one another.


Once again, thank you for your TALENT girl!!!


Much love,


Oksana ;)

Reviewer: martovska Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 03, 2011 08:03 pm Title: Chapter 45

So I just finished reading the last chapter!


And I am officially addicted to this love story!!!


But why have you stopped writing it? I see it has been 3 month since your last update!


I know you are about to finish your another story Underneath His Closes, but please don’t quit writing this one!!!


This is such a great story. I have been absorbed in reading it every night; I even refused my friends going out with them the other day LOL


I literally can’t stop thinking about the main characters now!


Also, I have read some of the reviews that the other readers left. And there was one, saying that Michael is to perfect, and that the story is cliché. But let me tell you something, if someone doesn’t like the way it’s written, that’s their problem. If I don’t like something, I simply don’t read it. You don’t have to change what you originally planned, because someone doesn’t like Tinsley’s character. Look how many people actually read your story already, and their high ratings!!! That’s the way you had that character since the very beginning, and that’s the outcome we got. I must agree with that person, that Tinsley is a little too clingy and dependent on Michael. But you pictured her as the girl growing without a real family, a father who could protect her, and the girl who was taken advantaged of physically and mentally so many times. You pictured her as vulnerable and fragile girl, who needs someone to protect her. So Michael is her hero, indeed…… and now she is surrounded with a false friend, who wants to mess her relationship with Michael; her ex, who doesn’t care she is pregnant with another man’s child; and bunch of girls like Brook lusting after her man. But what is wrong with Tinsley anyway? Does she really admit another man to be sexy? Is it hormones or what?


I can’t take the anticipation already! Please tell me if you ever going to continue writing it! I honestly love this story so much, can’t stop thinking about it!!! :)



Author's Response:

Hey girl! I just really have to thank you for every beautiful word in every beautiful review you've ever left me.
It means more than you may realize to me as an author. Reviews like yours keep all the hard work worthwhile.
However I might have to break your heart here and admit that I really feel like quitting this story.
I feel that it's had a decent amount of chapters already and I’d like to look back at this story with a smile since it's not too shabby for my second fanfic ever, I guess.
But I just don't feel motivated enough to continue with it.
Not that I'm running out of ideas but I've just kinda moved on to my 3 other stories, 2 of which are posted on this site:
Underneath His Clothes (as you already know ;D) and my latest story F*ck-Buddies.. lol
I also have this fanfic called My Professor, Monsieur Jackson on MJJE.com but for some reason I didn't feel like posting it here.
I just get this kinda bad vibe from some of the reviewers on here, especially after that one review you read on this story.
It really hurt my feelings, to be honest and killed a lot of the motivation I felt for this story.
Maybe someday though, when I'm not as busy as I am now with school and my other stories, I just might update for this one again, but I can't promise anything.
I'm glad you enjoyed the read though and cared enough to leave such wonderful reviews. Really warmed my heart over, so thank you for that!
And I'm also glad that you understand Tinsley's character so well. Cause yes I did try portraying her like this more fragile and sensitive young lady who leans onto her man a lot.
The main inspiration behind her character, in all honesty, was one of the people that I admire most in my life: my mother.
She's been through a lot and often acts just like Tinsley does. The point of this was also that I hate how people (mainly people that don't know Michael) often try portraying him as this weak, almost effeminate person which I personally don't believe suits him at all. So I guess that what I tried fighting against in this story somewhat by making him Tinsley's rock, or her 'hero', if you will.
And yes, Tinsley feeling certain things for her ex again has everything to do with pregnancy hormones and being away from Mike for so long.
No need to worry about that. I actually had this whole thing planned out where her experiences with Stephan would lead to something that will only serve to make her stronger in the end.
So that it would be like a certain 'turning-point' in her life.. but hey, I guess that'll come in good time.

Again, thank you so much for your awfully kind words. It means so much to me.
After all, it's all for L.O.V.E

Rosanne

 

 

Reviewer: martovska Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 03, 2011 03:37 pm Title: Chapter 44

That’s not the least she can do by giving her that wedding dress, that's for sure. Diana probably would be imagining herself walking down that aisle, since that is her own dress. How stupid, Tins?

Reviewer: martovska Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 02, 2011 10:11 pm Title: Chapter 30

I have seen this story being posted before, but I didn’t know you were the author who wrote Underneath His Closes. Since on this site there are so many stories that are not even worse opening them, I thought this was one of that kind. Girl was I wrong!!!


I just started reading this story a couple days ago, and was planning to leave my review at the last chapter, but couldn’t wait any longer. The ending of this chapter made my heart beat a top speed! There is only one sentence to describe your writing. YOU ARE A HELL OF A WRITER!!! You have you readers right where you want them, absorbed deeply into the story. Just AWESOM job girl!! I love it :)

Reviewer: Mjjprincess Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 31, 2011 08:53 am Title: Chapter 45

I loveee it! Omg michael & tinsley are going out and partying haha i have a bad feeling about that stephen guy, i think he wants more then friendship. I wonder what Diana's plan was? Is she trying to break michael & tins up? Cnt wait for the next part

Reviewer: iam_music Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 30, 2011 01:45 pm Title: Chapter 45

Smh. Michael and Tinsley both need to have their asses at HOME. They both better behave. What 6 month pregnant woman would be at a bar anyway? And with Diana's trifling ass? Tinsley is dumb. I sure hope Michael uses his common sense.

Reviewer: Gottobethere Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 30, 2011 11:24 am Title: Chapter 45

Oh my God! I'm so happy you updated to this story again!
I rly missed it! And the classic, wonderful dose of drama..
Cause DAMN! Stephan and Diana r both back and Mike isn't around to save the light of day??..
Trouble!! As for his brothers talking him into going out..I'm afraid the hormones might cause even more drama in the nearby future.
Oh God Mike has to end the tour and come home to his woman Quick! lolz
Update soon xxx

Reviewer: Moonwalker95 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 30, 2011 07:46 am Title: Chapter 45

Yessssss you updated :DDDDD If diana was a good friend she would of told tinsley is was a bad idea to dance with stephan I mean its obvivous he's still in love with her  >:(

Reviewer: musiclover Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 29, 2011 07:14 pm Title: Chapter 45

PLZZZ UPDATE!!!!!

Reviewer: EnJay7 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 06, 2011 10:15 am Title: Chapter 44

Well, I finally read all the chapters :) and I really, really loved this story. I like the way it's written and I think it's very...special.

I laughed, I cried, I jumped in my seat, I dreamed....I'm so addicted!!

Great job, you're amazing!

 

Reviewer: EnJay7 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 05, 2011 04:22 pm Title: Chapter 33

"Return to me" in italian it's Ritorna da me, not "Retorna me" ;)



Author's Response:

Oops, sorry.. I'll change that right away!
I know a lot of different languages, unfortunately Italian isn't among them (yet).
I just really liked the song and wanted to use it .

Thanks, it's always nice to learn something new ;)

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