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Date: Feb 03, 2017 06:49 pm Title: Chapter 32- A Halloween Treat

Wonderful!

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Date: Feb 03, 2017 06:29 pm Title: Chapter 31: The Day the magic was bound.

"You don't know them! You have never lived outside these walls! You spend all your time in the world that you created. In a world of music and magic, but you have never lived in the real world. Trust me. Love me enough to know that friendships in this town are going to take time. You need to guard your heart Michael. Not everyone is as kind or as loving as you." These words broke my heart for the 'real' Michael. That's exactly what happened to him. The scene where Alyssa came to get Michael from town was magical and so beautiful. Wow, what a beautiful ceremony. What amazing chapter! Amazing writing. You are a breath of fresh air!

Author's Response:

You are WAY to kind to me. Thank you so much for reading and enjoying my work. Feel free to add me on Facebook at Alessandra FeatherQuill Jackson if you would like to chat. I'm always thrilled to add my amazing readers. 

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Date: Feb 02, 2017 09:20 pm Title: Chapter 23: Emma's mistake.

I hate this Mayor. I hate Matthew! lol

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Date: Feb 02, 2017 05:21 pm Title: Chapter 19: The Crescendo

Wow, that was intense! So beautiful!

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Date: Feb 02, 2017 01:41 pm Title: Chapter 12: Vodka and Chocolate.

Forgot to mention that I like how you named the mayor Don Sneddon. Both despicable people!

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Date: Feb 02, 2017 01:30 pm Title: Chapter 11: Alone in the snow

Magical!

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Date: Feb 02, 2017 01:30 pm Title: Chapter 11: Alone in the snow

Magical!

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Date: Feb 02, 2017 10:20 am Title: A Hand Magician

You capture Maestro very nicely. He speaks the way my imagination feels he would. Lovely.

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Date: Feb 01, 2017 11:13 pm Title: Whispers In the Night: Chapter 6: Running Away

I didn't find anything wrong with this chapter at all.

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Date: Feb 01, 2017 10:50 pm Title: Chapter 4: The Tempest

I'm loving it so far!

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Date: Nov 29, 2016 08:08 pm Title: Epilogue One

That was so sweet

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Date: Nov 29, 2016 07:59 pm Title: Chapter 28: The beginning of the end.

That was so cool

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Date: Nov 29, 2016 03:21 pm Title: Chapter 24: Atlas

Talk to michael

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Date: Nov 29, 2016 03:14 pm Title: Chapter 23: Emma's mistake.

Shoot, didn't see it coming

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Date: Nov 29, 2016 09:11 am Title: Chapter 22: An innocent blush

Just relax

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