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Reviewer: michaelfan90 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 20, 2012 05:44 pm Title: Chapter 5: One Good Friend Is Better Than None

as always, you did a great job on this chapter. your a great writer. its like i can feel their pain. i hope something good happens to them. i hope she does go back and get her G.E.D. maybe then they can live a little easier. i wish they could have some much needed quality time as husband and wife. they're bond is very strong. i hope all those doubts and what if's leave her head. her marriage and her kids are a blessing. there is no use dwelling on the past. she just gotta worry about her present and strive for the future. please update soon hun. i really love this story.



Author's Response: Thank you so much!! This is very beautiful review you have left me. You're constructive feedback in letting me know I am achiving what I've always wished with my writing. Thank you so much!!!! Much love!

Reviewer: greenlemonade Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 19, 2012 11:47 pm Title: Chapter 5: One Good Friend Is Better Than None

I loved this chapter and janet is an amazing friend to her. :)



Author's Response: Thank you so much!! Much love!

Reviewer: MikesDoggoneGal Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 19, 2012 11:25 pm Title: Chapter 5: One Good Friend Is Better Than None

I'm so glad you updated after so long :) I love this story, go on girl!! Lots of love <3



Author's Response: Yep, after so long I got some inspiration! Thanks so much for your continued support!!

Reviewer: missmj2012 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 14, 2012 07:39 pm Title: Chapter 1: Didn't we almost have it all??

This is such a beautiful & touching story, I love how they stick together through better or worse like a real married couple. I'm adding this to my favorites. :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your support! Much love!

Reviewer: MikesDoggoneGal Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 14, 2012 07:31 pm Title: Chapter 1: Didn't we almost have it all??

You need a co-author ? Too bad I can't work with you :( I really love this story and would love to co-write but college works are just pain in the behind :P I hope you will get someone better... anyways, continue the story, I'm always here to read and review :) <3



Author's Response: I totally understand! Why does school have to be so stressful for everyone?!?! But I definately will continue! Thank you so mcuh for your support!

Reviewer: MikesDoggoneGal Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 14, 2012 07:25 pm Title: Chapter 4: The Other Half

Man that's really touching! *_* And lil' Madison 'mom and dad's grown-up time' huh? LMAO! Just imagine any parent's reaction!! haha! Please Continue this story and update as much as possible. I'm really loving this! I guess Maila should go to work too... :P



Author's Response: Lol!! I'd definately be curious as to where on earth my child got that from!! You just gave me an idea fro another chapter! I will try to update really soon. Thank you so much!! Much love!!

Reviewer: MikesDoggoneGal Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 14, 2012 07:13 pm Title: Chapter 3: Whatever happens

Oh god... Mike got fired? That's so sad. But I'm glad that he's hoping for better. Lots of Love <3 xx



Author's Response: Thank you!! Much love!

Reviewer: MikesDoggoneGal Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 14, 2012 07:06 pm Title: Chapter 2: Mistakes

Wow... plots like this should be done! I love how Mike care about Maila and working hard for his family!!! Lots of love <3



Author's Response: Thank you so much!! Lots of love!

Reviewer: MikesDoggoneGal Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 14, 2012 07:01 pm Title: Chapter 1: Didn't we almost have it all??

Interesting start! Really I'm hooked up the moment I red the first chapter... :)



Author's Response: Thank you!!

Reviewer: mimi j Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 14, 2012 05:08 pm Title: Chapter 4: The Other Half

Aww. This is sooo good! Lol it's reminds me of good times. My Fav show :)



Author's Response: Thank you!! Good Times is definately where I got the inspiration for this story and IT'S MY FAVORITE SHOW TOO!!!! It's the best show ever!! Thank you for the review!!!

Reviewer: michaelfan90 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 14, 2012 04:59 pm Title: Chapter 4: The Other Half

OMG THEY ARE SO CUTE. listen to how they are to each other. its just beautiful. keep going hun. im already in love with this story.



Author's Response: Thank you so much for your support!!

Reviewer: michaelfan90 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 28, 2012 08:52 am Title: Chapter 3: Whatever happens

this is such a beautiful story. i hope things turn out good for them. they are a beautiful strong couple and i hope nothing will break their bond. they are so understanding of each other. most couples will let their frustrations get the best of them and they will argue and fight. your characters make me jealous, lol i wanna man like mike. please update soon.



Author's Response: Thank you so much!! I never knew people felt this way about the characters and I thought I had lost readers! Lol!! Don't we all want a man like Mike? I will be updating soon!! Thank you!!

Reviewer: Mjjprincess Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 08, 2011 08:27 am Title: Chapter 3: Whatever happens

Aww beautiful:) cnt wait for more

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: Mjjprincess Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 08, 2011 08:24 am Title: Chapter 2: Mistakes

Aww ;( really sas but im loving this!

Reviewer: Mjjprincess Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 08, 2011 08:20 am Title: Chapter 1: Didn't we almost have it all??

Aww lovly :) im loving the start of this

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