Date: Feb 09, 2014 03:34 pm Title: Chapter 3 - Again!
Ooh, neat! Very awesome, as well as very well-written, too. I like it. :)
And I hope that Kelly will be able to tell Michael and Sam about her past (as well as why she made her vow when it came to men the way she did). I know that both Sam and Michael would believe her... :)
Keep up your super-neat, very phenomenal and creatively beautiful writing! :)
Date: Feb 09, 2014 03:28 pm Title: Chapter 1 - The Decision.
Neat so far. :) I like it. And I hope that she'll meet Michael, tell him all about her past, and why she dislikes all men because of what happened to her when she was eight years old, and that she'll get some help for what happened back then, too.
Keep up your super-neat, very awesome and creatively beautiful writing! :)
Date: Sep 11, 2011 08:27 am Title: Chapter 1 - The Decision.
Please continue c:
Thank you for your review : I'll continue for sure dear heart.