Date: Feb 09, 2013 07:51 am Title: I'm Your Baby Tonight...
This is brilliant.
The plot reminds me slightly of "fever" by piziedust in the way the two never could seem to TALK about what was going on.
And then you tok the story to a whole 'nother path, forcing the feelings out and bringin them to this point in time, and I have no words for the sadness that ocmes with this being the end story, knowing that deep down they have real feelings, but everything else in their lives won't let them keep something so beautiful...
Date: Dec 20, 2012 10:20 pm Title: I'm Your Baby Tonight...
Sequel PLEASE !!!! I had read a snippet of this on a blog site months ago & couldn't find it. Now i've finally found it & got thru it & im like WOOOW !! You did an awesome job on this & i would REALLY love to read some more of it !! Whitney is my girl, my love, my all time fav & i love me some Michael so reading this was exciting. If you needed a sign that you should write some more, this is it girl ! lol. But all in all, great job on this :)
Date: Jun 02, 2012 01:28 am Title: I'm Your Baby Tonight...
Even though you're probably not going to continue this, I still want to say you should really think about it. Cause you're the best writer on this site!
Lots of other authors think so too! So I hope you'll really think about it.
Oh. Could you check out me and backpackkk's story Ain't It Shocking What Love Can Do? You know when you get a chance.
But anyway, please think about it. :)
Date: May 31, 2012 02:16 pm Title: Ain't It Shocking What Love Can Do
If I was Whitney I would've done some major flirting with Michael in front of Tatiana. Why didn't he chase after her?
Author's Response: Cause he was confused upon whether choosing the one he loved or the one he occasionally desired. But it only gets better with every chapter so don't go anywhere, cause there's more to come. :)
Date: May 18, 2012 09:17 pm Title: Ain't It Shocking What Love Can Do
oooohh they got they freak on. lmao! im loving this. lolz
Author's Response: I'm glad you are. And yes they did! Lol. Another chapter should be up very very soon. :)