Date: May 11, 2017 11:36 pm Title: Expect the Unexpected, Book I
I honestly almost forgot how quick tempered Michael could be so I knew he'd be livid once Nic spilled the beans, but I'm glad that she was able to detain him. Nic just killed boss and offing Quan (if Nic allowed him which I knew she wouldn't b/c her and Quan are close) and Trish would bring waaaay too much heat. They need to take it in stride and get the Boss situation, and anything connected to that, cleaned up and squared away before they bounce to the next move. As much as Trish deserves to be offed it's just too much right now, but I'll be looking for payback later, lol. Maybe they don't have to kill her but let Nic get a good two, three, seven piece in... shit, idk lol, but she need something! To be honest I'm going to have to take some time out and go back and re-read this story b/c there's a big block in my memory.
Moving on to Nic not telling Michael everything about her past with his brother. She needs to come clean regardless of how Michael will view his brother afterwards. The "profession" they're in is hard enough on their relationship and I believe a clean and honest slate will better that.
Great chapter. You didn't disappoint and I enjoyed it as always!
Now onto your authors note. Girl, I have been in the same boat and I have deleted countless stories because of it. Don't make that mistake I did. The story is fine and once you finish it you can always put it under construction while you're writing Book II and go back and fix the inconsistences and character development where you feel it lacks. No one expects you to have the perfect story especially if you've been working on it sporadically throught the years because you often forget little details that have a big impact as the story progesses and that's okay. Keep chugging and go back and fix it later if that's what you want.
Thanks girl! Michael got with Nic and his temper subsided a bit but we knew it wouldn't be too long before it made its way backπ© It's just part of what makes him. Lol. Killing Jaquan just would have been messy all around but I'm glad Nic knows how to talk up a good game. Trish will eventually get what's coming to her. But things will eventually gets squared away. Nic and her secretiveness is annoying even though we understand why she feels the way she does but with her and Michael's relationship growing, it's better to just get everything out of the way now. Thank you for the support. From author to author it feels good to see that the story isn't as messed up as I thought it was. I hope to continue to entertain you guys β€οΈ
Date: May 11, 2017 02:43 pm Title: Expect the Unexpected, Book I
I ALMOST missed this yo. *cabbage patch* because I didn't. I'm going to read when I get home for sure.
lol I hope I don't disappoint. Not too much happening in this chapter just some clearing up old issues. Hope you enjoy nevertheless!
Date: Apr 19, 2017 07:41 am Title: Expect the Unexpected, Book I
Yoooo this is crazy i love it. Continue please
I am! Sorry the update is taking so long! And sorry I didn't respond sooner I'm not getting the emails for reviews for some reason! Thank you for reading β€οΈ
Date: Apr 16, 2017 08:03 pm Title: Expect the Unexpected, Book I
This sounds promising already β€β€β€β€β€β€
Aw, I'm just now seeing this! Hope you enjoy it's a bit rough in the beginning but stick with it and I promise you it won't disappoint
Date: Apr 02, 2017 08:48 pm Title: Expect the Unexpected, Book I
omg that was some crazy sex going between Michael and Nicole and for boss good for that son of bitch you go nic home girl is not playingπ±π good writing girl keep it comingπ“π“
Update coming soon!
Date: Apr 02, 2017 01:35 am Title: Expect the Unexpected, Book I
I can't deal. Michael and Nic both crazy. How he gonna kill a man and then turn around and ask Nic for some sex? Crazy. But I do hope that Nic is careful with what she's getting into. The drug game has some demons so she needs to watch herself.
But boss as stupid for doing that π.
Lmaoo I felt like I owed y'all a sex scene AND we both know they crazy anyway so I was like what the hay ππππ and yes Nic better be very careful she doesn't even know what she's getting her self into this is where the song Part II (On the Run) becomes the theme of the story *no spoilers though* π Boss is very stupid I was going to kill him off at another part in the story but I got sick of him existing so..... πππ
Date: Mar 23, 2017 11:51 am Title: Expect the Unexpected, Book I
Yo Suuuuzzaaaay, I've been waiting... I don't know how long, for you to updadate this story and when this flashed on the recents page last week I was hype asf. I've really missed this story, Nik Nac & Mike, and most importantly your writing. I'm glad that you've decided to continue it.
Now on to the story, it's ironic that Michael tells Nicki that she's going to be a target with them being together when people found out and by the end of the chapter she is a target. I'm ready for what you have in store though so I know it's going to be goooooood. Don't make me have too many heart attacks though.
What it do boo?! ππππ I feel so bad that I left for so long. Life happened and happened fast and I just went ghost π© But now that it's back I'm so excited to finish what I started . I'm in love with the ending of this and what Book II will bring. Oh and for you to say you missed my writing ... girl ... don't make me cry okay π₯ that's so sweet ! I know this story is so different than what's usually on the site so it still comes as a surprise that people really like it πππ
Michael always knows best lol .. either his intuition or his instructions always prove to be right it's crazy. I can't wait to give y'all the next chapter. I'm gonna write the next chapter of Cheater and this one at the same time so hopefully I can update both this week or early next week. Thanks for reading β€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈ
Date: Mar 23, 2017 08:17 am Title: Expect the Unexpected, Book I
Why u left me hanging like thiss!!! God please dont let whoeve HE is succeed in that shot. I hope they see it before iy happens. Please continue very soon. I mean VERY SOON. like tomorrow :) lol jk. Not really but please update soon.
Lmaoooo girl I gotttttttt chuuuuuu I can't leave y'all good folks hanging for too long!!
Date: Mar 12, 2017 05:52 pm Title: Expect the Unexpected, Book I
Omg those two are my favorite couple they going to take over the world l hope they end up happy and have kids lolππ³
I really love them too!! I fangirl while writing them LOL but yesss so excited for their growth #JacksonDynasty
Date: Mar 08, 2017 01:07 am Title: Expect the Unexpected, Book I
YOURE BACK!!!!! Omg this is amazing lol. This story is one of my faves on this site and I've reread it more than a few times simply because I love it so much! I'm ecstatic to hear you're going to continue it! And I assure you: WE ARE STILL INTERESTED! I can't wait!!!!
Awwww thank you my love!! You all don't even know how good it feels to know that someone loves this crazy creation that's a result of this mind of mine! I won't disappoint you. Thank you for sticking with me β€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈ