Date: Jul 24, 2017 06:36 pm Title: California Dreaming.
Uh oh...wonder who took their van?...good suspenseful segment, btw :).
Whew...at least they're able to afford a taxi :)
whoever stole their van isn't a nice person smh but thankfully like you said they can afford a taxi lol.
Date: Jul 22, 2017 06:43 pm Title: California Dreaming.
Oooh... Good suspenseful chapter, btw :)
It's brave of Marlon to keep quiet even after being pummeled by Joseph.
Hope someone won't spill the beans about Michael and Amber being in Las Vegas... from what I've heard, there's a lot of mafia in that city...
Looking forward to more :)
Because he cares more about them then he does for Joseph but let's hope no one finds out or they are doomed.
Date: Jul 19, 2017 06:57 pm Title: California Dreaming.
I love that intro...it always puts me in the mood ;).
It's fun imagining Michael's and Amber's honeymoon in Las Vegas lol :D
i'm glad you enjoyed it ^^
I had fun writing it lol.
they did have fun at least they won't be that broke lol
Date: Jul 14, 2017 09:26 pm Title: California Dreaming.
I always enjoy a story where the characters go on the road together :).
Maybe Michael can return, and visit the horses from time to time...when the coast is clear :)
Looking forward to more :)
We shall see if he does or not knowing Michael lol. I'm glad your liking it so far. Plenty more for you to read.
Date: Jul 13, 2017 09:12 am Title: California Dreaming.
Lol at their bantering and I'm sure Michael will get his whish come true of having more babies just not right now but you can't blame him for trying :)
He won't let Nevada be an only child he will have his way eventually but when they are more settled. The pair are always bantering or bickering can never be just one smh lol.
Date: Jul 08, 2017 11:00 pm Title: I Found that Girl.
Considering the outcome...not a smart move. Although Marlon meant well to try to stop Joseph from being nasty and insulting...
Well yes Marlon sometimes doesn't use his brain at times but he did mean well. At least there wasn't too too much violence at least.
Date: Jul 03, 2017 07:50 pm Title: I Found that Girl.
Have enjoyed Michael and Amber's story so far :)... Am looking forward to their further adventures together :D.
Perhaps together, they can be a 'force' Joseph never figured he'd have to reckon with...as they say 'strength in numbers' :D.
I'm glad you've had fun reading this story. There is plenty more to read in the sequel. Who knows they might have a chance to away from Joseph 😏
Date: Jul 01, 2017 09:09 pm Title: I Found that Girl.
Omj...Joseph sure seems to be enjoying intimidating his sons into doing what he wants them to do...smh
I think Michael will get Amber to agree...eventually
That's the only way he will get his way somehow force and intimidation smh. Hopefully he will but how is the issue.
Date: Jun 29, 2017 10:50 pm Title: I Found that Girl.
LOL...Marlon making himself the center of attention, and turning on the 'Southern' charm... XD.
Funny chapter...made my day XD.
Because that's how Marlon rolls smh lool. Glad I did a good job XD
Date: Jun 26, 2017 06:54 pm Title: I Found that Girl.
Yeah, I can see Amber and Michael in LA together... Although I think Amber will try to keep Michael from rushing into things and acting hastily...knowing what she knows about his family...Doing anything hasty would possibly put them in more danger...especially if Joseph were to find out...
Looking forward to the next chapter :D
I agree Amber will try to stop him from jumping into things lol. But that's why she's there lol. Ooh if he finds out..it won't be pretty tsk.