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Reviewer: Singin to Mike Signed [Report This]
Date: May 10, 2016 07:57 am Title: Blooming Into Something Beautiful

Aww, this is so sweet! I love how Michael treets Kayla! Great work Loyalpyt!

Reviewer: mjlifemate58 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Apr 17, 2015 11:42 pm Title: Blooming Into Something Beautiful

Omg i luv it keep it up!



Author's Response: thanks

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Reviewer: yourockmyworld Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 14, 2015 01:43 pm Title: Blooming Into Something Beautiful

Aww that's so just so sweet they are meant to be with each other. :)



Author's Response: I know. But Kayla has to wait until November 4th, her birthday since she is 17

Reviewer: Gabby7 Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 26, 2014 04:56 pm Title: Michael And Kayla's Christmas Story

Hmmmm, so what happens when they pick up Janet and Tito from the airport? 



Author's Response: We celebrate Christmas and hang out thanks for the review also review my new stories Little Things and Jackson knows best

Reviewer: Gabby7 Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 26, 2014 04:53 pm Title: Blooming Into Something Beautiful

Hi! I think your story has potential and I would like to see where things go between Michael and Kayla. If you'd like, I can give you a few pointers on developing your story more. If not, I understand...I don't want to impose, just want to help. If you do, just let me know and we can email one another. Also, never give up your passion for writing. 



Author's Response: I'm not but thanks for reviewing and let me know if i have bad spelling hunty lol. (sorry i love rupaul)

Reviewer: FallynLovesMichael50 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Nov 29, 2014 06:53 pm Title: Oath

awh! I swear this story is making me jealous hehe



Author's Response: really

Reviewer: FallynLovesMichael50 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Nov 29, 2014 06:51 pm Title: Oath

awh! I swear they get cuter and cuter together 

 



Author's Response: yup

Reviewer: FallynLovesMichael50 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Nov 28, 2014 08:26 pm Title: Keep Holding On

can't wait for the next one 



Author's Response: thanks

Reviewer: FallynLovesMichael50 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Nov 28, 2014 08:25 pm Title: Keep Holding On

awh poor thing luckily michael will hopefully make things right 



Author's Response: he did

Reviewer: FallynLovesMichael50 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Nov 28, 2014 08:19 pm Title: Oath

can't wait for the next one 



Author's Response: coming soon

Reviewer: FallynLovesMichael50 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Nov 28, 2014 08:18 pm Title: Oath

awh!! I swear this is about the cutest chapter ever hehe 



Author's Response: thanks

Reviewer: FallynLovesMichael50 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Nov 28, 2014 08:17 pm Title: Oath

poor michael and wow lisa is a bitch and a slut if I was Kayla I would out her in her place which is what she needs desperately 



Author's Response: trust me Ima do it

Reviewer: sydneylovesmike20 Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 28, 2014 01:56 pm Title: Oath

Poor michael. He'll be happy soon.

Author's Response: i know

Reviewer: shellymjbean1989 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 10, 2014 10:04 pm Title: Keep Holding On

i really like this story i would appreciate it if you would continue to write more 



Author's Response: I will but I cannot be on much do my cheerleading, school, gymnastics and dance

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