Date: Aug 17, 2016 01:09 pm Title: What My Parents Taught Me...
I was a little iffy at the first reading it because you arranged it in the first chapter but now reading more into the story. I have to say you're doing a decent job so far! I cracked up when Janet found out what he used in her shampoo oh mj such a prankster smh. I'll pop up more and spread my comment sparkles on your story. Also if your interested in a banner I'll love to do one for you if you want.
Lol thank you i love a good critique. I want to make this story as good as possible. I'm gettinng better along the way i think. Adding more detail chapeter by chapter. The next story im going to write is going to be top notch lol. I hold this story dear to me though. If you have any more critiquing you can tell me. I love them. and thank you! I love reading reviews on how people view the story.
Date: Aug 17, 2016 10:50 am Title: What My Parents Taught Me...
I'm glad Tiffany and Michael are friends now. Hopefully, they can be more soon. I don't think Michael should be upset that Tiffany made him hide from John. She was only trying to protect him. I think she needs to tell Michael who John's father is. I wonder what Tiffany's dad has been doing this while time. Amazing chapter!!! Please continue soon!!!
I will continue soon! I love reading your comments! <3
Date: Aug 10, 2016 11:44 am Title: What My Parents Taught Me...
Tiffany needs to stop that mess. What kind of person does that? And having a friend who's father is the grand wizard for the KKK? Screw that. I'm glad she said they were just friends. Daisy seems annoying as hell. Lmao I can't believe Michael pissed in Janet's soap! That's hilarious! I need someone to think about me the way Michael does Tiffany. I really hope Tiffany isn't a complete bitch to him, though. He's too sweet for that. I know Michael won't give up on her. This is amazing! Please continue soon!!!
Haha.. Thank you soo much! Tiffany is stupid ahaha lmao
Date: Nov 16, 2013 03:25 pm Title: What My Parents Taught Me...
OMG I love it! It's so sad! Poor michael!
Date: Nov 05, 2013 07:58 am Title: What My Parents Taught Me...
You are so brave to write this story and you have any troubles dony bother to let me know. I give you props for this! And to anyone who writes a story similar to this. awsome book btw. :) update soon
Author's Response: Thank you soo much! :) i havent updated in almost 85 years though.. i need to be persistant. Thank you for offering help, but AtMJsHouse is my go to gir about these things... but i WILL talk to you :)