[Report This]Date: May 08, 2017 05:16 am Title: Chapter 31
Ooh she should have just beat her ass that bish, you should have let me come over and do it! She had no right to say any of that bull in front of little mj!. She will always be a jealous bish in my eyes grr. I feel Gabby shouldn't of ran away because problems will always follow you till you confront them or that's just my opinion lol. I don't think it will take that long to find her and I just hope she's somewhere safe with Lil mj. This isn't good for either of them ahh so messy.
[Report This]Date: May 08, 2017 04:55 am Title: Chapter 31
Um... no. No no no. Who does Gabby think she is? Honestly. She's just running away from the best thing that's ever happened to her. Doesn't she know that Michael is more powerful than Levi? He wasn't gonna let MJ get taken away. Oh my God. Michael better go find her and bring her ass on back. Please continue soon!!!
Date: Apr 20, 2017 04:42 pm Title: Chapter 30
Woah, was NOT expecting that!
Author's Response:
Hi, I'm sorry...I didn't realize I never responded to your review. It think this is the chapter Jeanine and Gabby meets. I hope you continue to stick with this story...I have a lot coming up soon.
Thank you for reading and reviewing!!â¤ï¸P
[Report This]Date: Apr 18, 2017 03:46 am Title: Chapter 30
Oh let the drama commence I'm ready!
Date: Apr 17, 2017 09:20 pm Title: Chapter 30
Now that's a twist! Gabby had Levi's baby...Jeanine had an affair with Michael!
Wow! Neither knew until now! Looking forward to the drama!
[Report This]Date: Apr 17, 2017 01:57 pm Title: Chapter 30
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Gilbert! How can you end right there? When I got to the end, I kept scrolling looking for more! So it's out! Jeanine is Michael's side piece and Levi's wife? Gabby just can't escape Levi, huh? I can see the shit unfolding right before my eyes and before you even post the next chapter. I had to tell my kids to be quiet when I read the last line cause I swear I heard Jeanine herself say those words out loud. Girl I had to sip my (wine) and look away briefly! DAMN! Update soon please!!
Author's Response:
Marri Moe, you know I love a good cliff hanger 😂😂 and yes, it's definitely about to be some drama! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
Date: Apr 17, 2017 05:17 am Title: Chapter 30
What an interesting turn of events! Michael will have a fit when he finds out about this. Can't wait for the next chapter! (and also can't wait for the next chapter of your other story.. =D )
Author's Response:
Yea, I drew this out...and now we're about to learn more about this intertwined relationship. Thanks for reading and reviewing!!! Working on both stories. Hope to get them out soon.
[Report This]Date: Apr 16, 2017 09:25 pm Title: Chapter 30
Wow i can't wait for the next chapter! <3
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading and reviewing!!! Hoping to get it up soon!
[Report This]Date: Apr 16, 2017 08:44 pm Title: Chapter 30
Holy shit she's his wife!?!? Small world we live in. This is too much drama to have to wait for. 😂 Please continue soon!!!
Author's Response:
😂😂😂 a very small world! I don't want to keep y'all waiting too long. I'll try to have the next scene up as soon as possible! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
[Report This]Date: Apr 16, 2017 06:32 pm Title: Chapter 30
I'm too blew reading this chapter omg! I loved it tho! I'm excited for what's next. I'm so happy you updated I love this story.
Author's Response:
Lol, yes! More is doon to come! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!
Date: Apr 16, 2017 03:55 pm Title: Chapter 30
Oh, and excuse me, my edit didn't work. Happy Easter to you as well!ðŸ‡ðŸ°ðŸ³ðŸŒˆðŸŒž
Author's Response:
Thank you!
[Report This]Date: Apr 16, 2017 03:45 pm Title: Chapter 30
Wooh... Shit! Lol. I damn near lost my eyeballs, they bugged out so hard after Jeanine introducing herself as Levi's wife! Drama ain't the word honey!
Yes, Jeannie is a stalker...almost Glenn close "Fatal Attraction" like. MJ needs to draw a firm line, once and for all. Tell that chick to cut the shit and get a restraining order because she can't accept that he doesn't want her and has moved on. Her real issue too, is not that he's just moved on, but with WHO...Levi ain't ish either...Baby MJ is lucky MJ stepped in and UP. Because that sperm donor of his, is nothing to be proud of.
Also, Gabby needs to get her mind right, because sometimes she sounds mentally and emotionally unstable... Wanting to die after a man leaves you? Hell nah sis. I might cry and be heartbroken, but not this. MJ needs to get in touch with Mae, IMO to see if there is something he's missing there, like a family history or history on Gabby's mental health, at this point, before going even further. Although, he can't really go further after sleeping with her with no protection. Lol. Subconsciously, I think MJ wants her to have his baby.
Thank you and more please!ðŸ†â🌟😉😆ðŸƒ
Author's Response:
😂😂😂 I love your review!!! Girl yes, drama ain't the word! It's about to be some shit! I love how attention to detail you are...And yes, we're about to find out Jeanine's side of the story.
And unfortunately Gsnby is a bit unstable emontionally. If a guy feels the need to leave me ...😠Nigga, bye! 😂 I've learned my lesson before...lol.
Thank you for your detailed reviews!! Will try to update as soon as possible!
[Report This]Date: Apr 16, 2017 03:37 pm Title: Chapter 30
Something I missed on my last review was how cute it was that Gabby reassured MJ that Michael is his father. I think that's great that they both consider him to be MJ's father. He is the one raising him when Levi is a deadbeat.
Author's Response:
It is cute! And Gabby and Mj are luck to have Michael. I can picture Michael being like this in real life.
[Report This]Date: Apr 16, 2017 03:31 pm Title: Chapter 30
Now I'm extremely curious! What does Jeanine want?? She's has some obsession. Gabby, Michael, & Levi seemed to move on. Levi is real cold for doing that to Gabby. It might be hard but she probably should take the job of Michael's personal assistant. Does that mean she would have to go on tour with him & MJ?? Jeanine and Levi have a sad marriage, both were cheating. I can't wait for the next one! Thanks for updating, good job!!!
Author's Response:
Yes, Jeanine is on some stalker shit! And we are about to find out why. Levi is a complete jerk for what he did to Gabby.in some way he wants to have this hold on Gabby...and we will eventually find out why...this is only the beginning.
Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
[Report This]Date: Apr 16, 2017 03:29 pm Title: Chapter 30
yoooooo i've been a silent reader all this time (i know i'm so sorry) but this chapter right here made me comment. J E N I N E really sis?? wooooooooooooooowwwww. i'm shook. when i read that line, i literally got up and did some crazy shit on the floor and started to break dance. really????? my lord. and when gabsters said "can you hold me?" i MELTED. they are so cute, honestly truly levi is missing the hell out smh. anyways, i get so excited when i see you update!! love love love you and the story â¤â¤
Author's Response:
😂😂😂 I am laughing my ass off at your review! 😂😂 I love it! And Thank you! I'm glad this chapter had an effect on you! Break dance?? 😂😂 And yes, I know I drugged this out but this is only the beginning. Janine's story is about to be revealed...stay tuned!
thank you for reading and reviewing!!!