Date: Nov 20, 2014 02:11 pm Title: Chapter 17: The Innocent Betrayal
Im glad she signed the papers
Can't stand that woman (lmp) (not in fiction or real life)
I hope they only have happy days from now on they deserve it
Great update
Author's Response:
Thank you! I'm sure you will love what's coming next.
Date: Nov 20, 2014 09:07 am Title: Chapter 16: A Wicked Turn of Events
What's the other thing? Im curious lol
I hope she signs the marriage certificate
Author's Response:
I'm not sure what 'other thing' you are referring to but I'm sure you will find out soon! :)
Date: Nov 19, 2014 11:34 am Title: Chapter 14: Impulse, Interrupted
Yay I'm all caught up!
Oh I am sure Michael had those "bad foods" Diana mentioned at some point..remember what he said his diet was like in his book Moonwalk before he changed it for some years get rid of acne and lose the "baby fat" sometime after Thriller and plus the bodyguards had said he had a junk food loving side in spite of his healthy lifestyle
Oooo I wonder who this person is..hopefully Michael can keep his cool without doing something he would only regret displaying in front of Diana
Author's Response:
You're right - Michael did have a very strict diet but he also had a lot of food sensitivities due to his skin conditions and a few other issues. He did have his 'splurge' days when he loved to eat sweets and KFC but they were few and far between.
Thank you for being such a loyal reader. I'm confident that you will enjoy where this story will lead you. :)
Date: Nov 19, 2014 06:38 am Title: Chapter 8: Not Close Enough
This chapter..not entirely sure of what to make of it..the scene with the phonecall bugged me to be honest, seemed OOC for Michael to be practically maximum rage..I mean if there was truly bad blood after the divorce I don't think he would have bothered to remain in touch with Lisa in real life nor would she have been invited to private funeral..don't see him being that mad unless she did something real out of line to Diana or was like a stalker..while she may be portrayed as one here I didn't hear of her doing it for the reasons she gave for following him in interviews between '96-99 could very well be true.who knows..
maybe I feel this way because I decided to research what truly went down in the marriage and aftermath..but then again the "Lisa is a villainess" formula in fanfics bothers me considering there were people Michael dealt who were much worse..
all this aside keep on writing..
Author's Response:
I respect and value your opinion and feedback. However, Lisa and Michael had a lot of ups and downs in their brief marriage as you mentioned above. This story is not an exact depiction of their relationship because I wanted to add my own little flair and change things simply for the sake of being creative. Michael, being the sweet and kind person he was stayed on good terms with his ex wife because he wasn't the type of person to be harsh with anyone. However, Lisa truly did break his heart and SHE FOLLOWED HIM during the History tour from one city to another. She also begged him several times for another chance but it was Michael in the end who decided to cut ties with her for good.
Also, Lisa Marie does something specific in this story which you will read down the road that might put things in perspective about why her character is portrayed the way it is here. You're right, Lisa wasn't as bad as the other people in Michael's life but she did play a very important role and Michael was shattered when their marriage fell apart just like anyone else would.
Again, thank you for your review. I hope that you will continue reading. I'm confident that you will enjoy where this will go. :)
[Report This]Date: Nov 18, 2014 11:14 pm Title: Chapter 14: Impulse, Interrupted
i love this story i just cant wait to read the next chapter keep the great writing coming
Author's Response:
Thank you so much. There is so much more to come! :)
[Report This]Date: Nov 18, 2014 03:01 pm Title: Chapter 14: Impulse, Interrupted
Loved this chapter. WOW
Cant wait to find out who was at the dr. Jas and Marie with a minister? Lisa Marie? Who?
Author's Response:
Thank you so much!
You'll find out in no time! ;)
[Report This]Date: Nov 18, 2014 02:22 pm Title: Chapter 13: The Unwise Decision
Oh can't wait for next chapter.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reading! :D
[Report This]Date: Nov 18, 2014 01:58 pm Title: Chapter 12: Compassion Within Reason
Great chapter.
Author's Response:
Thank you!
[Report This]Date: Nov 18, 2014 01:58 pm Title: Chapter 14: Impulse, Interrupted
This story is so amazing. The emotions are so deep. Honesty, friendship, lust but, over all L.O.V.E. 😘. I am very happy Ana told him about the baby. Michael was so cute talking to her tummy. Lol cupcake Jackson that had me giggling.
There is one more thing, I picked on this story there is one secret lingering. Every time Jas ask Ana to tell Michael the truth about something; Ana says is not the right time. In this last chapters she said she would tell him after the tour is over. I can't wait to know the curiosity is very intense :).
As for the person who is at the door. Two guesses; it seems of course that a bit of drama is part of a good story. So here it comes just before the happiest day on both of their lives here come the BS. Guess 1. Joseph Jackson 😬. Guess 2. LMP😈. I can feel it is one of this two fools. Michael be strong stand your ground DO NOT let them win. Diana if the person happens to be Ms.Thing do be shy, is she gets out of line slap the taste of her mouth. Yes ma'am never liked her at All.
Please update soon. Love Lummi 😘
Author's Response:
HAHA! I love your reviews!
Yes, there is a 'secret' lingering which is something that a lot of readers are curious about. Be patient - you never know what it could be! ;)
Your guess for the person at the door is very interesting - who knows? You just might be right about one of them. ;)
THANK YOU FOR READING! :D
Date: Nov 18, 2014 12:41 pm Title: Chapter 14: Impulse, Interrupted
Wonder who thar person is
By the way im happy she told him
Author's Response:
Thank you! :) Be sure to continue reading as the story unfolds.
Date: Nov 17, 2014 03:34 am Title: Chapter 11: Witnessing The Unexpected
Didn't see that coming
Can't wait for the next chapter
Author's Response:
Thank you! :)
[Report This]Date: Nov 16, 2014 08:34 pm Title: Chapter 1: When Fate Intervened
I LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH! I can't wait to see what's going to happen in the next chapter. Diana is going to be PISSED i can just fill it. BUT PLEASE UPDATE SOON ,THE SUSPENSE IS KILLING ME.
Author's Response:
I am so flattered, THANK YOU. I hope you enjoy it as it continues to unfold. There is still SO much more to come! :D
[Report This]Date: Nov 16, 2014 02:20 pm Title: Chapter 9: The Colors of Love
i hope michael is alright i cant wait to read more of this beautiful story
Author's Response:
Thank you so much. I know you won't be disappointed. :)
Date: Nov 16, 2014 11:05 am Title: Chapter 9: The Colors of Love
You wanted me to read this and now i have. I have to be honest, you know i'm pratically allergic to mush, so other then the mushiness I will admit you have improved GREATLY. I can see it clearly that you are evolving. Topics you wouldnt have written about before you are tackling, and you are explaining the scene very well. You're involving everything from the weather, to the furniture to the lay-outs of the room like you have never done before. I'm impressed.
BRAVA!
A.F.Q. Jackson
Author's Response:
Oh gosh I can't believe you read this haha. Thank you so much. I know it's mushy and you hate that stuff but I'm glad you noticed a change in my writing style. I owe a portion of it to you! :)
Date: Nov 16, 2014 01:08 am Title: Chapter 9: The Colors of Love
They're the perfect match
Can't wait to see what happens next
Author's Response:
Thank you so much. I know you won't be disappointed! :)