[Report This]Date: Nov 23, 2014 02:22 pm Title: Chapter 23: The Beginning of the End
Oh this is sooo good. I can't wait until the other chapters are posted.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! :)
[Report This]Date: Nov 23, 2014 02:04 pm Title: Chapter 23: The Beginning of the End
OMG!!! That was intense. I knew that Gerwin guy was shady. The way he keep looking at Ana.. I know is not right to wish harm on anybody but, all this individuals that hurt Michael & Ana they will answer for their injustice & cruelty.
All I feel right know is sadness & anger. Sadness because Michael is such a sensitive soul, he let's his fears take hold. I knew he must had resort to take something to numb the pain. I hoped they never have another fight like that. I can guess & hope that Ana is really pregnant this time.
I'm so p*ssed off I can believed Joseph (that's my guest on the mystery man) is at it again. How can that man who is so evil & cruel have the same DNA as an Angel like Michael. Please update soon. My heart needs a healing.
Ana & Michael have EARN their Happy Ending. Can we please finally know the secret. Can Ana tell Michael. And Michael tell Ana what's happening REMEMBER no SECRETS. Is all for LOVE Lummi :(
Author's Response:
I'm glad you liked it. It was really difficult to write this chapter but I'm glad I got through it.
I don't know what to say about Michael's father to be honest - I guess we all just have to respect him because if it weren't for him, we'd never have Michael.
The secret will come in due time. You need to be patient! :)
Thank you for reading. :D
[Report This]Date: Nov 22, 2014 09:21 pm Title: Chapter 22: The Deceit of the Innocent
loved this chapter
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Thank you so much! :)
Date: Nov 22, 2014 03:33 pm Title: Chapter 22: The Deceit of the Innocent
I can't wait for more
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Thank you so much! :)
[Report This]Date: Nov 22, 2014 02:32 pm Title: Chapter 22: The Deceit of the Innocent
Wow Terrific chapter. I met the mystery person is Lisa Marie Presley.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much!
You'll soon find out! ;)
Date: Nov 22, 2014 12:01 am Title: Chapter 20: Everyday Create Your History
LOVED it specially the remember the time part
He's so sweet letting Marie on stage
Please continue
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! A lot of people loved the end scene of the concert.
I am confident that you will enjoy the rest of this story too. :)
[Report This]Date: Nov 21, 2014 10:37 pm Title: Chapter 20: Everyday Create Your History
Loved this with Michael being oh stage and the little changes made to the songs. I wonder what Dana sees when she opens up the door to Michael's room
Author's Response:
Thank you! :) I'm glad you liked it.
Stay tuned to find out more!
[Report This]Date: Nov 21, 2014 09:52 pm Title: Chapter 20: Everyday Create Your History
you and these cliff hangers lol i loved this chapter it kept me smiling through it all i cant wait to read more of it keep this amazing story coming i truly loved how he did REMEMBER THE TIME it was awesome keep up the amazing writing
Author's Response:
Thank you so much. I knew you would like it. I think you will enjoy the rest of it! :)
[Report This]Date: Nov 21, 2014 04:42 pm Title: Chapter 20: Everyday Create Your History
Yesssss, those were awesome chapters. I really loved the history tour. Mmmmm Gold Pants SEXAY ;). I loved how you added the all bonus songs & surprises. Ana most had been red as a tomato. And Marie is luckiest girl in the world she got to dance with the Michael. Lucky b*tch LOL :D..
You know, Michael filmed all his concerts. I wished they would released them. At least a few of each concert. He never perform the same show twice. In 1996, History in Australia he did an Off the Wall medley for that show. In others he perform TS and blood on the dance floor. But because I'm a bit of an MJ naughty gal. My favorite is the 2nd royal concert in Brunei. He did two shows there. 1.Dangerous & 2.History and ladies for the History show you can really appreciate the gold pants and Mike Jr ;). He is up and saying hello world ;). Mmmmm mental picture :D.
I would loved it if they released the full show he did for History on his B'day. His 39th b'day, complete with the surprised when they brought the marching band, the cake and everyone sang Happy birthday to Michael. Ohh Michael I missed you so much and I LOVE YOU ALWAYS (sorry has a moment)
For the Dangerous tour, I believe he did performed: Remember the Time. I've seen a You Tube video off a full rehearsal for the Dangerous Show. I believe is also Michael sang TWYMMF acha oooooo! Sorry I'm babbling.
Please update soon. I can't wait to KNOW what made Ana dropped her water bottle. Is all for L.O.V.E. Lummi <3
Author's Response:
I love your enthusiasm. Your reviews always make my day and I'm glad you are enjoying this story. :)
[Report This]Date: Nov 21, 2014 03:27 pm Title: Chapter 19: HIStory: The Beginning
Loved this chapter. Great one
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! :)
[Report This]Date: Nov 20, 2014 08:08 pm Title: Chapter 18: The Calm After The Storm
My friend Whoooo, you put me through all the emotions tonight; I was p*ssed, sad, I cried and I laugh. Haha also super curious, Ana was about to tell him the secret she's been holding onto for 5 years and it didn't happened: PLEASE I've waited 18 chapters. Michael said he didn't want no secrets between them. I need to NOW even more than Michael lol ;) but seriously!!!
I'm super po'd I can't believe that hussy got through his security, then she drug him, then got him naked, she is so ughhhhh.
Just a suggestion, I want Michael in the morning to fired all his current security team , if his main man Wayne is there, he will get some trustworthy guys for the hotel and arena. I want Michael to be super po'd, so mad he cusses. I think is sexy but, I want people to see he is the BOSS and thou shalt not f*ck with the KING.
Sad, when Ana broke the news about the baby. I guess in terms of the story is better that way for now, if Ana has to fight a b*tch aka lmp, she can throw down without any worries. Ohhh and I would love for Ana to whoop some LMP *SS!!!!!
I did tear up, whe Michael wrote the message in the window. I want to give him a baby, I'm here for you Mikey Bear ;). I know becoming a Daddy is what he desires the most.
You can always can count on Jas & Marie to lighten the mood and make everyone laugh :)). They are so cute and so naughty lol, all up in Ana bed side business lol ;) Get the camera. Hahaha..... PS: Sorry about my rant is all for love.
Please update soon.... L.O.V.E. Lummi <33
Author's Response:
Your reviews are so thoughtful and full of energy I LOVE THEM!
I can almost guarantee you will like where this story goes! :D
[Report This]Date: Nov 20, 2014 07:08 pm Title: Chapter 18: The Calm After The Storm
I really love this story. I can't wait for my chapters.
Author's Response:
Thank you! I'm so glad you like it.
[Report This]Date: Nov 20, 2014 06:12 pm Title: Chapter 18: The Calm After The Storm
keep the great story going i love it
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Thank you so much!
Date: Nov 20, 2014 04:00 pm Title: Chapter 17: The Innocent Betrayal
Geeee how low could Lisa get..all I will say is thank God she isn't as bad as that irl
Author's Response:
I agree. She doesn't seem to be malicious in real life but for creative purposes, I turned her character just for fun. :)
[Report This]Date: Nov 20, 2014 03:31 pm Title: Chapter 16: A Wicked Turn of Events
i would hope she would sign the marriage certificate to michael great chapter cant wait to read more of this story
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! :)