




Date: Dec 31, 2013 02:22 am Title: Chapter 20:In No Condition to Smile
I Wanna Feel Bad For Michael, But He Did Deserve Getting Hit In The Nose. I Mean Like He Coulda Called && Said Something.
But It Just Make Me Wonder Why He Let Bob Walk Him Into the Trap. Now Its Like He Stuck Right?????
What He Gone Do If Janice Wanna Be With Him??
Author's Response:
Don't you... He makes you wanna feel bad for him but after what he did your like HELL NO your cute but sorry that was foul, yeah he did deserve to get hit in the Nose I saw him getting Punched by quint as soon as he flew off to marry Lisa.
I know he could have called i would have LOVED to be a Fly on the wall when he had to explain to Shana this same thing and I'm like WHY did he Not called SHANA before he married Lisa damn... if he had been in a relationship with shana from 1991 on through 1994, why didn't he call her and let her know
but yes in the story he should have called at the very least when he knew he had decided to go through with it, but I kinda wanted to keep that part of reality in it and in reality he did it JUST like that he Never called he just did it and then apolgized.
Well let me put it this way when I started this story i knew I wanted it to be an affair setting but I didn't know how I wanted it to come into play bob walking him into that trap was my way, and to gain simpathy for michael I put Him and janice in a distance and out of there right frame of mind situation because think about it If they were good and he hopped off and married lisa then everyone would have really thought he was playing her but he wasn't.
He's Not stuck because something else is going to come out about there marrage that is going to clear it up a bit more... but it doesn't mean it's going to come out to janice, or that this isn't akward situation
if janice wants to be with him... he's gonna do what He wants and that be with her, you will see





Date: Dec 30, 2013 07:18 am Title: Chapter 19 Focus
Damn! I hate this walking on egg shells bit they are doing! Sophie can feel something is wrong and she ain't happy. I think this point and time Janice will leave Michael and there's nothing he can do about it. He can't explain away what he did and why he did it (to me).
Author's Response:
I KNOW ain't it just terrible... I love it gets under your emotional skin hum,
yeah Niw that Sofia is back on her grind and out of her own stuff she can see things better and clearer then she did before she sees things are gettting REALLY BAD for her friend and her friend won't say what is happening so she can't do to much to help her situation out of she won't talk to her but she can be Sofie and angry about it
yeah it's a tough pill to swallow what he did and yeah how do you explain jumping off and marrrying somoene else i would LOVE to see how he actully explained that shit to shana when he REALLY did that to her
But no worries these two aren't done, her leaving don't mean he can't find her and shes stuck in resistince space because she does love him and now she realizes it and it hurting her oh they ain't over they just got started
Date: Dec 29, 2013 10:35 pm Title: Prologue: The Next Move
Hahaha Naawwwww I Meant Do She Like, Got Two First Names Or One First Name && One Middle Name????????
Author's Response:
Thanks for clearing that up i think each is separete but some have just prefered caling her first and middle instead of all three and/or first and last





Date: Dec 29, 2013 02:14 pm Title: Prologue: The Next Move
Im gonna deffo take some time out to read this soon it looks good!





Date: Dec 29, 2013 06:55 am Title: Chapter 18: Weddings F***ing Suck... Pieces - Pt 2
Damn I feel her pain! That girl is going thru the ringer right now. Michael is being trapped and he don't even know it. I love this story but I also want the tables turned on Mike so he can feel her pain.
Author's Response:
WHo wouldn't feel that pain.... she is definately going through something. what until she gets back to work... YES Michael is being trapped alot of people don't notice that it WASN'T michael idea to get married to Lisa, it was Bob's. and noow he's in he don't know what will happen.
stay tuned, glad you love the story
Date: Dec 29, 2013 01:31 am Title: Prologue: The Next Move
Lmao I Hope They Dont Get Together Only For Michael To Be Loving Lisa Marie That Would Be Messed Up. , Aye Low Key Is Her Name Lisa Marie Or Lisa Marie ?????? o_O
Author's Response:
Not How i designed the story...you'll see what happens with our lovers, okay not really understanding the question you said "Is Her Name Lisa Marie Or Lisa Marie ?" did you mean "Is Her Name Lisa Marie Or Lisa Maria ?" because her name is LISA MARIE PRESLEY
Date: Dec 29, 2013 12:12 am Title: Chapter 18: Weddings F***ing Suck... Pieces - Pt 2
Oh!&& Thank You Girl, But You Aint Have To Thank Me, I Love Reading Your Story. Kmsl.
Author's Response:
I like to thank the fans that are willing to take the time out to comment... I have missed you i have wanted to know your thoughts on all the other chapter from the last one you comment on on becuase you always have good questions and I'm always willing to answer





Date: Dec 29, 2013 12:08 am Title: Chapter 17 H.A.T.E.U Weddings (F***ing Suck) - Pt 1
Man I Don't Blame Her For Getting Drunk, She Was Hella Hurt. But I Dont Like That Even While She Down And Hurt Haa Friends Wanna Claim That Michael Was Playing Her. Cuz I Feel Like This, If He Could Tell Her Parents That He Was Seeing Haa Or Whatever He Said Lmao Then The Relationship Was Real As Hell. Matter A Fact Wasn't It Him That Wanted To Meet Her Parents. Yeah,,See Niqqas That Wanna Play You Usually Dont Wanna Meet Yo Family. I Hope He Can Get Her To Listen To Him && Understand His Side && His Feelings. LowKey While I Was Reading This It Made Me Think Of That Song Mario-Crying Out For Me
Author's Response:
Yeah how in the scheme of things with her mental torment can you blame her for getting shit faced... she was in litteral Hell getting a constant slap in the face having to deal with a wedding and wondering. did 'he and Lisa do this' it was torture
Corection the people visiting Trisha, Kendra, jasmine weren't her firneds persay they were Sofia's sofia went to HER college with them they all were in law together and in the same soroity, as sority sisters, Janice on the other hand was someone that Sofia met at the local campuses gathering spot out side of either of there campus and they clicked and made a it regular and thats how they became friend. so Terisha and Kendra she knew by aquintance, they aren't tight as our core friend group, there tight like that with Sofia only mostly.
Yeah her parents it is interesting about how he wanted to see her parents isn't it, and the thing people haven't noticeed is you don't know know what happen yet when the girls left him with her parents and what exchanges took place, but you will find out in due time
you will see what happens between them, just know these two are LONG from over and That STRONG SEXUAL CONTENT is about to take FULL affect in the next few chapters.





Date: Dec 28, 2013 11:59 pm Title: Chapter 18: Weddings F***ing Suck... Pieces - Pt 2
Omqqeee, I Swear I Was Thinking Of That Song Too Though. =) But Anywayss, I Don't Want To Believe That Sofia Would Act Like That. I Mean Like Really Janice Just Had Her Heart Crushed. (But Iguess. Smh Females.)
Author's Response:
Pieces fit perfectly, Sofia was... but it was her weekend and she wanted everyone to focus on her when they know on the daily she focuses on everyone else and she was hurt Janice thee responsible one decide to loose her sense on the one weekend she would have thought they would have been thick as theives and on the same page she was diapointed
you also have to realize janice never told her what happened because she was trying to save it for when she returned from her honnymoon or when it offically comes outbut they said that in there two fights.
yeah females, Janice being drunk brought out a nother side of sofia... she was reacting to her actions if Janice hadn't gotten drunk and forgetful they would have been cool all weekend but her drunkness messed them up but they are good now and it will all come to gether for them when it come out Michael is married to lisa
Date: Dec 28, 2013 10:11 pm Title: Chapter 18: Weddings F***ing Suck... Pieces - Pt 2
ugh I cant believe michael married lisa and that jerk bob got his way. yes janice should have been more trusting but she had every right not to be with him keeping her in the dark about lisa. jan has been hurt b4 and michael should have taken that in consideration. they are both wrong.
i agree with whoever said (cant remember which friend said it) that mike only did those sexual acts to jan to have her wanting more
and mike did tell janice he knows how to get in her head
sofia and marcus' wedding was wonderful.
Author's Response:
yeah I know... but it was always going to be that way... see bob caught Michael at a time of vulnerablity he was Low and he would have done anything if it sounded Legit enough he sold him the Package and he was so down and out he took it
Janice is complicated and she let Other people get into her head but she has to stop blaming her friends when her friends stopped nagging her about him and what he did when THEY BOTH asked them to all her insecurities were hers alone period granted her friends didn't help by co signing every time Lisa came around
Michael was wrong about keeping her in the Dark about Lisa but in his mind he didn't see anything wrong with it becuse he wasn't doing anything wrong should he have told her about the plan from the get go YES but I got the idea for this from Michaels real ex girlfriend Shana she said in a interview 'he ;eft and went and got married to lisa and came back and apoligized' so yeah Michael really did shit like that
Kreshell her cousin said it, if you have't figured it out SHE is the party girl rebel of the them with the no snonsense attuide so she can see tricks right away
AH you caught that comement about getting into her head your paying attention and the wedding was good it's the first I've ever done from a friend point of view looking in, if i write a wedding it's from the marrying couple point of view this was difernt for me I liked it.





Date: Dec 28, 2013 12:11 am Title: Chapter 16 They Don't Know... All The Way Home
Daaaammmnnnnn *smh*
Author's Response:
Exactly... Nice to meat you, can't wait to hear what you think
Date: Dec 27, 2013 08:20 am Title: Chapter 16 They Don't Know... All The Way Home
I 'm just frustrated that'all girl! BTW, That was a nice great uptade..
But now, I'm craving MORE for the next parts!
Michael far away, hope she doesn't gonna give up on him.. But It will be hard if he's with Lisa...
Hope to have a new chapter to read soon, girl.
THANKS AGAIN for your answer! Love the story!
Author's Response:
Love is Complicated ... and being in Love Iwth Michael jackson is even more complicated
I know if your frustrated that means your feeling it yell scream tell me how it makes you feel I love that stuff
yeah Michael is Far away and With Lisa it is complicated but that just set up the remading part of the story because for real you think after THAT last meeting they had that it's over NOT by a long shot
There will be a new Chapter soon I'm working on it RIght Now as we speak but it proably won't be up till Late tonight or some time tomarrow deprnding on How fast I finsh it tonight Alot of stuff is happeing in this Chapter as most and it has to be set up right and until it's right it won't be posted so cross your fingers for tonight





Date: Dec 27, 2013 08:16 am Title: Chapter 16 They Don't Know... All The Way Home
New reader here. I know one thing, Michael big head assed betta not had played that girl like that after everything she has done for him! Pssh! Great story and update soon plz I really can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response:
Welcome to the story can't wait to here what your thinking,
all i can say is it's Very complcated you will get a explintion maybe not one you like but you'll get one in the next Chapter or two which I might add I'm working on right now
Thanks for thinking the updates great i worked really hard on that Chapter it was ment to be the most climctic part of the story more to come
Date: Dec 27, 2013 04:32 am Title: Chapter 16 They Don't Know... All The Way Home
Noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
It's christmas girl!!!!!!!! Christmas suppose to be magical!!!!
Oh god, no!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I'm so frustrated!
you did a really good job with this chapter but I'm so sad!!!!!!!!!!!!
Please, let her take the plane and go for him, Pleasssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssse, I'm begging you!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
In my Defense on The Christmas Thing I posted a GREAT Chapter ON Chrismas, where they went to florida to see her parents and house hunting and went to stomp... ALL bets were off after that one sorry
all I have to say about the her going after him, even if she could hop on a plane and go after him WHERE is she going Bob only told her a in genral place he went The dominican Republic and I don't even think he said that much can't rember didn't look before I responded she could go there and be there 2 weeks and STILL not find him or where he went to
They went to a specific place and ONLY security going with him Direct would know exactly where they were going sorry the Next CHapter was planned a few Chapters back Sorry
all I can say is don't worry, These two are FAR from over
Date: Dec 25, 2013 10:40 pm Title: Chapter 14:Back in New York City
It is getting hot!! Can't wait!!