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Reviewer: delavielove Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 03, 2012 04:38 pm Title: Chapter 13

;) Awwwww the first time ^_^ That was hot, just damn steamy hehehhehhe. omfg was Michael a virgin? idk he didnt seem virginly to me lmao.

Omfg and she let him come inside!!!!! *le dies*



Author's Response:

XD that question will be answered in the next chapter=) 

"Omfg and she let him come inside!!!!! *le dies*" <<--LMAO, Oh yes, yes, yes, yes!!!

Thanks for reviewing!!!!!

Reviewer: delavielove Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 03, 2012 04:29 pm Title: Chapter 12

;) Oh snap get it, get it, heeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy

that fucker stepdaddy emilio is just ugh he so goddamn heartless and he working my nerves and ugh everytime he pops up i just get in that mood i just be like ew go the fuck away he making me so mad i aint even using punctuation hey lmao



Author's Response:

Yassssssssssssssssssssss! LMAO

He is, he really is. Lol you into for real huh? Glad yous liking it!!!

Thanks for reviewing, Lemon Cake=)

Reviewer: Keepitinthecloset Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 03, 2012 04:27 pm Title: Chapter 5

Aww how cute of how michael wants to be more than friends with her. Emilio is wrong og what he did to her.

Author's Response:

It is=) And ughhh I know. Thanks for reviewing, love.

Reviewer: delavielove Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 03, 2012 04:21 pm Title: Chapter 11

O_O Aww shit



Author's Response:

Aww shit is right. Thanks for reviewing, love=)

Reviewer: Keepitinthecloset Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 03, 2012 04:13 pm Title: Chapter 4

Aww mikey is falling for her. Her step dad is starting to get on my nerves. I hope michael saves her soon.

Author's Response:

Yes, he is=) Oh and you will absolutely hate him soon. Thanks for reviewing, love!!

Reviewer: delavielove Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 03, 2012 04:08 pm Title: Chapter 10

:-) Awww lovely chapter ^_^ Michael is definitely the best thing that's happened to Adrianna since her father. Love it, love it dear heart xoxoxoxo



Author's Response:

He most definately is =) Thanks for reviewing, love!!

Reviewer: delavielove Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 03, 2012 03:59 pm Title: Chapter 9

Awwwwww :/ I know what you mean. When I wrote those chapters in the Protection story when Michael's daughter was raped/molested, that shit hurt me -____________________-

I didn't like Audrianna going all off on MJ but you gotta sympathize. She just be going through a lot, and its so great that she has somebody like MJ thats understanding.

“Both of y’all stop fuckin’ cussin” Cameron yelled out <------- And his ass cussin lmfao.

Emilio I just can not even begin to deal with his ass. he needs to just go fall off a cliff like omfg nassssttttyyyyyyy ratccheeeeetttttt aaaaaaasssssssssss

Great chapter dear heart, and the song matched perfectyl ^_^ xoxoxoxo



Author's Response:

That killllllleeeddd me. I updated this while I was pregnant, knowing my over emotional ass had no business writing sad shit (I cried for a good 30 minutes about it) smh

I know it. It takes a special guy to stand by a girl the way Michael does here=)

XD I be doing that shit 

I KNOW HOW YOU FEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEELLLLLLLL =/

Thanks for reviewing!!!!!!!!!!! And yes, I love that song=)

Reviewer: Keepitinthecloset Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 03, 2012 03:56 pm Title: Chapter 3

Those some beautiful cars. I missed reading ur stories u always cracked me up and i finally have time to read ur stories again. Great chapter by the way. When u get time can u check out my new stories also?.

Author's Response:

Lol Ikr! I just have a thing with pretty cars b/c my brother customizes cars=) I'm glad you are back to reading! And right now, I am SOOOO behind on reading other stories, combined, I'd say I have like 100+ chapters I need to get to. I'll have to see about squeezing that in.=) Thanks for reviewing love.

Reviewer: Keepitinthecloset Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 03, 2012 03:43 pm Title: Chapter 2

Before i look at the pictures i seen o'shea i had feeling u was talking about ice cube i was right. I was about to ask u til i look at the pictures. Awesome chapter by the way.

Author's Response:

Lol, yup!! Since his name was already Jackson,  just threw him into the story XD Thanks for reviewing, love.

Reviewer: Keepitinthecloset Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 03, 2012 03:23 pm Title: Chapter 1

Her stepdad is sick and twisted. I love to fuck his ass up for putting his hands on a woman. I cant stand men like that. Im enjoying ur story already and its good. :D long time no talk. Did u have ur baby yet?

Author's Response:

Mhm, right you are about that. smh. And Yess, how have you been? Yup, I had him on June 7th, He will be one month old on Saturday=) Thanks for reviewing love!

Reviewer: gottaluvrikki Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 02, 2012 09:33 pm Title: Chapter 14

Lol Tae is too stupid. Omg Dri mom there this wont be good.

Author's Response:

Lmao, I know it, that chick is crazy. And yes, you are quite right abou that. Thanks for reviewing, love!

Reviewer: delavielove Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 02, 2012 07:40 pm Title: Chapter 8

Lmfao. I love Cam, he's crazy XD :D

And ewww they're back??

Peace, Love, Glitter Glove, dear heart xoxoxoxoxo



Author's Response:

Cam acts just like Michael's friend Santiago XD

And yes, they have brought their ratchetness back -__-

Thanks for reviewing, love!!

Reviewer: delavielove Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 02, 2012 07:29 pm Title: Chapter 7

:-) Lmao, Audrianna and Mike better get it! And ctfu! Michael loves the Top Notch Bitches. 

But for real doe....the stepdaddy -_________-

Love it, love it dear heart xoxoxoxoxo



Author's Response:

Lmao! For reallllllllXD I was listening to the song while typing...so MJ ended up with the Top Notch Bitches XD

You gonna HATEEEEEE him in more recent chaps!

Thanks for reviewing Lemon Cake!!!

Reviewer: delavielove Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 26, 2012 07:49 pm Title: Chapter 6

LMFAO!!! She playin all hard with Mike! CTFU! Michael was like awww shit. "Old dusty pussy" I was like dafuck? Oh my damn lmao. They are too much! And lmmfao about the names people give their intimate places. I can NOT deal XD xoxoxoxo



Author's Response:

Lol IKR? XD That had me rollin too! And you talking about names... -__- Ander with "Alexander the Great" smdh XD

Thanks for reviewing!!!

Reviewer: delavielove Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 26, 2012 07:17 pm Title: Chapter 5

:-) Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww

Michael is just wonderful! Aww, he's too sweet! But ctfu! Lawd O'Shea with the sealant had me!!! I can't deal with that! But I love the growing bond between MJ and Audrianna xoxoxoxo



Author's Response:

XD Lmao, yes!! But yes it's beautiful=)

Thanks for reviewing!!

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